Here’s a short video featuring possible places around town to write poems about. I also offer a few words of encouragement to anyone thinking of submitting to the contest! Deadline is coming up soon, on April 15!

(Thanks so much to videographer Holly Hofmann at Word Vancouver for creating and posting this on Word Vancouver’s Facebook Page and social media, and to Executor Director Bonnie Nish for initiating this and for her continuing support!)

There are so many places that have meaning for us that we could write about. How to start?

In my recent Tyee piece, I provide three examples of Vancouver-themed poems, written in very different styles. Henry Doyle takes plainspoken, direct approach to describe working at the Main & Hastings washrooms. Former Vancouver poet laureate, Evelyn Lau, weaves together lyric depictions of her neighbourhood, including the last remaining hold-out, a woman with an old home sandwiched between condo developments. Alex Leslie’s hyperbolic prose poem is terrific parody of the typical scenic postcard, transforming English Bay into a surreal and disturbing landscape.

In my March 19 online workshop with the Vancouver Public Library, I discuss various approaches to writing place-based poems. Here are some of the strategies:

• Ask a grandparent/elder to point out a favourite place on a map and describe a specific event or scene. What did they smell, taste, touch, hear (conversation, stories, nature sounds) and see (colours, objects, animals, plants, people)?  Turn that interview into a poem.
• Use headlines from an old newspaper or magazine or postcard as a writing prompt
• Research and write a poem about the history of a significant home, school, restaurant, playground, park, garden or gathering place using an actual scene from your memory or someone else’s (refer to my Possible Resources Page for websites and books about local history)
• Address a person, place or thing, or have that person, place or thing address you (a speech, a story, a letter, a conversation/dialogue)
• Read at least 4-5 place-based poems, and then write about the changes you’ve witnessed in your own neighbourhood (see poems listed on my Possible Resources Page)

Once you have managed to put a draft poem on the page, it’s a wonderful feeling! But once the clouds of glory from creating something new have dissipated, it’s time to take a closer look at your draft. Mary Oliver wrote about needing 40 drafts of any one poem, or even more. It take time and effort to refine a poem. What steps can we take to better communicate our vision of the poem to readers? Here are some questions to ask your draft poem:

• Where does the poem really begin, and where does it end?
• Is there something contained or not contained in the poem that I am avoiding?
• How can I hone my poem further? 
  • Word choice: can I use any stronger and more vivid verbs, and can I spot any abstractions or clichés?
  • Figurative language: inserting metaphors and similes
  • Are there places that need “unpacking” (further development) or need further compression or cutting out altogether?
  • Does it flow well? (Read it aloud!)
  • Can I improve my use of white space? (line length, line breaks, stanza breaks)
  • When to “show” and when to “tell”? Where is it best to be indirect (e.g. to imply and connote) and when is it better to be direct (to state)?
  • Are there other layers running beneath the poem to tap into? (temporal, emotional, spiritual)                          

I also recommend this article by Ann Gardner, “Place-based poetry: one step at a time.” It is geared toward high school students, but it provides an excellent illustration of the revision process for anyone who is new to creative writing.                                                     

I cycled over to the Museum of Vancouver today to meet with MOV education staff to prepare for some upcoming poetry workshops with elementary school students in May. I had a chance to go through the fascinating exhibits currently on display, some of which are terrific resources for anyone looking to learn more about the city or seeking material in order to write a poem for the City Poems Contest. There’s of course the eye-catching Neon Vancouver display, but there is the c̓əsnaʔəm: the City before the City exhibit (about what some call the Marpole midden), as well as the comprehensive A Seat At the Table exhibit, both of which contain a treasure trove of artifacts, videos, and stories. The latter illustrates the history of Chinese immigration and settlement in BC in a very engaging and interactive way that will appeal to people of all ages. I loved the focus on food too!

I attended a fascinating ProD day talk hosted by the Vancouver Heritage Foundation on Friday which featured a virtual walking tour of Strathcona led by Carmel Tanaka who runs Cross Cultural Walking Tours. The tour underlined how very diverse this neighbourhood was right from the late 1800s and early 1900s. There are a number of cultural groups that have held walking tours in the past here, and many of the paths overlap and intersect. There’s Jewish, Italian, Japanese, Black, and of course Chinese history here. Immigrants of Russian, Serbian, Scandinavian and other European descents also lived in this neighbourhood (e.g. evidenced by various churches and the Russian Hall.)

Then today, I went on a Black Strathcona tour organized through the Museum of Anthropology by the African Descent Society of BC to commemorate Black History Month. We heard about the thriving businesses in Vancouver’s Black community, Black women community leaders, early Black community members in the late 1800s-1920s , and the destruction of Hogan’s Alley by the Georgia Viaduct. We also passed by many historic sites such as Nora Hendrix’s home and Fountain Chapel. I’d of course read and written about some of this history before, but seeing the sites made the history come alive.

I was fascinated and wanted to learn more, so watched all ten of the superb short videos on the Black Strathcona website that are mentioned on the various plaques at sites on the walking tour. To my great delight, two of the sites (videos #1 about Vie’s chicken house and #5 about Jimi Hendrix spending formative summers at his grandma Nora’s home) are presented via spoken word! They are excellent examples of how historical material can be transformed via the vibrancy and imagery of poetry!

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I’m keen to get folks writing place-based poems! Although the February 21 online workshop that I’m doing with Heritage Vancouver Society is full (20 person waitlist), there are two more workshops coming up this March.

Pandora’s Writing Collective has partnered with me to organize a live, in-person workshop for 20 participants on Saturday afternoon, March 5, entitled Buried History: A Poetry Workshop at Mountain View Cemetery. We’ll convene at Celebration Hall at 2:30, and then go on a 20-30 minute walking tour on site led by Ryan Macleod. Then we’ll gather again at the hall to generate some writing based on a few prompts. To register, please email Pandora’s Writing Collective’s Executive Director, Bonnie Nish at blnish_pandoras@yahoo.ca.

Two weeks later, on Saturday, March 19, 2-3:30 PM, I’ll be doing a free online workshop, Writing the City: Crafting Poems about Place, with the Vancouver Public Library. You can register for one of the 50 spots here. I’ll go over some key components of poetry, discuss a few site-based poems, and then offer some writing prompts for participants to try out. There will be a chance for participants to share a short excerpt of what is drafted with one or two other participants in break-out rooms, before the session concludes with some pointers on revision.

I’ll be organizing a workshop this spring on the important subject of revision. Wonderful American poet, Mary Oliver wrote about undertaking forty-plus revisions on any one of her poems. I have to agree about the necessary process of revision. It takes time and attention to hone a poem. Everything counts–every line-break, every word, every piece of punctuation.

For updates on events and workshops, please check out the City Poems Contest Facebook page.